To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The characteristics of a society defined by the people and their living habits. To understand the characteristics of a society we must study and try to understand the people and their nature of living. But, I completely disagree with the statement that we must study major cities only to understand the characteristics of a society. To prove my position I am going to explore different areas and after feasible consideration we conclude the topic.
First of all, it is true that major cities are situated near iconic building and have myriad amenities. Once upon a time Queens and kings ruled the major cities, and many people thinks major cities deflect the characteristics of a country. But, that is not always necessarily true. For example, Paris, we all know that Paris has a strong history and played an important role in the past. but, now, in our modern days, in the age of globalization we can not truly understand the characteristics of the society. Because, now there are millions of immigrants work and live there, and society is a combination of micro societies itself. Cultures from different parts of the world coagulate there and create a unique society itself. So, we can not understand the true nature of a french society by only studying Paris.
On the other hand, if we stayed away from major cities and stay near a suburban areas we can be experience a different society. For example in villages people preserve their cultures and study the people of the villages we might discover new characteristics of a society. For example, we we travel away from Prague, from its crowded and touristy places we can be evidence of a new Czech society or a true Czech culture. while can con not never understand the actual nature of a society if we only study Prague.
Besides, villages and small cities are as important as major cities, because a country depends on villages for agriculture and depends on small cities and industrial belts for heavy industry. At the epilogue of the topic I can conclude that villages and small cities plays an important role while understanding the characteristics of society. Society is not an independent body and combination of micro societies. Peoples who lives in the society decides its nature and everyone uniquely different from each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, while, for example, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92764857881 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89480195281 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454780361757 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3642935965 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.35 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263275565033 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884965527081 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087419967919 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184276992283 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560325240939 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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