To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Glancing back through the history of humanity, humans love to socialize and their socialization with each other create a relation that form a society. The statement claims that to study the core peculiarity of a society, it is best to study their major cities — where most of the socialization occur. I strongly agree to the statement and argue that one should research the characteristic from the major of its population with three reasons.
To begin, it is undoubtedly that big cities are the most populated city; where people coalesce from every aspect of the society. Thus, it is best to research the city with a that demonstrate every part of the society. For instance, if one wanted to study the culture of Thai people, one should study its people in Bangkok and Chiangmai. The population of major cities are a combination of people from the city and suburb all over the country. One could get the picture of north-eastern, southern, central and eastern culture from both Bangkok and Chiangmai. The above example illustrate that major cities are appeal to people from every aspect of the society to come and live together. Isn’t it best to research a large group of subject? — the population is to tell.
Further, every cultures is at its peak when they are augmented in the civilized cities. Major cities, mostly civilize, are supported by the growth of economy and knowledge which accelerate how cultures of the society are developed. For example, the culture of north-eastern Thai, which originate from the poorest part of the country, is well develop by the support of well-grown economy and knowledge to its people in major cities. Consequently, food, one of the important aspect of a society, from north-east is at its best by the abundant supply of high quality ingredients and a knowledgable chef. From the example, the aspect of society will demonstrate at it best when it is observe in a big city.
Lastly, to understand aspect of a society, one should understand it roots; museum and archive in the major cities are the most resourceful of the informations. To illustrate, Thai national archive keeping the record of day-to-day event since the Ayutthaya era. Thai people are not fluent in English or other than native tongue like neighbor country, because Thai was not conquered by any western country. Consequently, if one know the history of a society, one will understand the society better by knowing the origin and reason. From the above reason, study the society in a city that have archive and museum will provide a significant information of a society origination.
Of course, some argue that characteristics of a society in major cities are contaminated with each other and one cannot get to understand the true characteristics. However, isn’t that to understand the characteristics of a society is to understand the whole society as one entity? Combining all aspect of the society, its people, its growth, and its history, and view it blend together create another view of understanding that represent a society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'observed'.
Suggestion: observed
... will demonstrate at it best when it is observe in a big city. Lastly, to understand...
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Message: Did you mean 'blends'?
Suggestion: blends
...ts growth, and its history, and view it blend together create another view of underst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, lastly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2558.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03543307087 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90871353372 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407480314961 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8532186141 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.583333333 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377180167721 0.243740707755 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104783741455 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863458742829 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222331701688 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570917373906 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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