To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The most important characteristics of society came from the culture that the majority of the people in society follow. The cultures are developed from beliefs and how people are governed in society. In each city, the beliefs and government are various due to many reasons such as the diversity in religion or race, weather, and geometry, or even, the historical events occurred in the city. So, the essential characteristics of a society that are derived from the culture will be different for each, which will lead to the reasons that major cities might not be the ideal place to learn. Here are some reasons why the major city might not be the best place to learn the essential characteristic of a society.
One of the reasons that the major city is not the best place to learn the essential characteristic is that the culture that the people follows will not be precisely the same according to various influences such as differences in the weather, geometry or religion. The obvious comparison would be the city in the rural area and the urban area. For example, the people in the major city, such as the capital city, tend to be more educated because there are a lot of universities an schools in the area. Together with the living expense higher than most cities, the people would be more liberal to a modern way of thinking because education will increase the possibility to have more attention to the Health, Politics, International affairs, and Technology which may alter the original characters that people have in the past or still have in some rural area. Therefore, most people in major cities tend to be more intellectual and modern where the people in the rural area will be more traditional and conservative — making it necessary to learn the characteristic of society from the specific city.
Another reason is that many major cities in many countries tend to have many tourist attraction locations, and the culture in the city can be effected in many ways. For example, a major city in Thailand, such as Pattaya is very well known for prostitutes in the eye of foreign tourists and considers to be a famous place where many illicit affairs happen. This images or the "characteristics" of people in Pattaya cannot be applied in other provinces in Thailand. Many foreigners went to Pattaya and took the women's characteristic in Pattaya as the norm for all Thai women and make inappropriate manners with Thai women in other cities. There are even news and posts in social media in Thailand that went viral with this topic as the content, which leads to the conclusion that the characters in the important city do not apply to every city.
Even so, the statement is not entirely false. In some country, the major cities might be the role model where other cities tried to follow and resulted in having similar significant characteristics. But if there are differences that are significant like the characters in Thai women in Pattaya where there are many prostitutes out in the open compared to, for example, Thai women in Bangkok where most Thai women are very conservative, and prostitution is not as common as in Pattaya then learning the significant characteristics in the major city and apply to other cities may not be relevant. Therefore, to learn the proper characteristic of any society is to learn directly from that society to avoid an accidental inappropriate situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, well, even so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2841.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 578.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91522491349 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90322654589 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92824605261 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.385813148789 0.4932671777 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 924.3 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.3253203981 60.3974514979 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.526315789 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4210526316 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121561135602 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482202457452 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292516437608 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856840671833 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267429416857 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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