To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It isn’t quite uncommon for us to associate entire cultures or societies with one particular thing. Hailing from a country like India, rich in diversity and having no dearth of cultural variety, it is quite an experience trying to understand and learn about the various societies spread throughout this country. If I am asked to list out my understandings of for example, say the Bengalis, images of tasty fish, the Howrah bridge and the city of Kolkata comes to mind. Given that Kolkata is indeed the capital city of West Bengal, one might say it is safe to assume that studying the major cities would in fact help us understand the society as a whole. Yet, if asked to talk about Kannadigas from the Karnataka, one might think of the Mangalore fish curry, the Mysore Palace and the pristine beaches along the coasts of Gokharna and Udupi. Why doesn’t Bangalore, the capital city of Karnataka not to mention the IT capital of the country, come to one’s mind in this instance?
The major cities of a society are the ones where the clock is ticking fast, everyone is in a hurry to get somewhere and the city never sleeps. It is the hub of all business, technological advancements and cultural diversities. The boundlessness of a major city is attractive to several communities and there is usually multiple cultures thriving within a major city. The cosmopolitan nature of a major city thus masks the intricate qualities that may truly define a society as a whole.
In contrast to the given statement, societies are nurtured by the families and communities thriving within the smaller regions. If one wants to study the Arabian culture, simply discerning the cultural richness and lifestyle of a city like Dubai will not do any good for the real stories about the emergence and life of the Arabians are rooted deep within the smaller towns like that of Mecca and Madinah in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia. Although, majority of the working class from a society tend to pool into the major cities, it doesn’t give us the complete picture. Thus, it is necessary to dive deep into the minor parts of a society to better understand its functioning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, for example, in contrast, in fact, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84636118598 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72202767965 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536388140162 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4638524573 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.428571429 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987870269813 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369776823369 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0204986532203 0.0758088955206 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688084215451 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01358138954 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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