To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Society is a group of people who live together in a more or less orderly manner. If we want to understand the most important characteristics of a society, it is imperative to consider all the facets that constitute society.
A society consists of the urban and rural population. The lifestyle and the ideologies of urban and rural areas differ vastly. In India, more than 70 percent of the population resides in rural areas. It’s major cities, though having a high population density, comprises of only 30 percent of the Indian population. If one were to only study the major cities, one would come to believe that India has only a handful of languages. However, the truth is that in India, one finds a new dialect or a new language in every town or a village. Thus, studying only some parts would not give us a holistic view and the nuances of society.
An important element of society is interdependency. There is not a single major city in the world that can thrive in silos. We, in cities, are dependent on the farmers in the villages, for our very basic necessities of food. In the southern states of India, the food is served on banana leaves and rice is an important part of the cuisine, whereas if one was to travel the northern parts of India, they would find delicacies made of wheat. The food people eat predominantly defines the culture of the society. Understanding the elements of society would need us to understand the relationships different components have with each other.
I agree, with the part of the statement, that we must study the major cities. The ideologies of the masses in major cities drive the news in the media. The media, in turn, influences the masses of society. If there is a major religion divide in the cities, the news coverage would show a lot of stories of religious violence and this, in turn, will gradually affect the entire society.
Understanding the parts to get a complete picture is crucial to study the most important characteristics of society. Hence, we must consider both the urban and rural societies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...hough having a high population density, comprises of only 30 percent of the Indian populatio...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...e farmers in the villages, for our very basic necessities of food. In the southern states of Indi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, thus, whereas, as to, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 359.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7938718663 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77991637858 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493036211699 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3475398013 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9523809524 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0952380952 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7619047619 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187061893218 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558852542176 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564838286137 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11374010503 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261766410937 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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