To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
To understand the most important characteristics of society, I believe it is imperative to study its major cities.
Major cities have become a hub for the job market. They experience the influx of thousands of youths from other cities, hoping to land a job and make a living. Smaller neighbouring cities do not have such job opportunities and hence job-seekers are forced to come to the major cities. Studying the inflow of job-seekers along with the current state of employment would give deep insights into how the society is functioning as a whole.
Apart from being the hub for jobs, major cities are also relatively more cosmopolitan than their neighbouring towns. Since people might come from all over the country to settle and make a livelihood in these cities, the culture of the cities becomes a blend of what was already present and what the new immigrants are bringing in. Different cultures interact and each contributes to the cities' culture and tradition. For instance, one of the more cosmopolitan cities in India might have concerts for traditional South Indian carnatic music which receive large attendancem, while concerts of heavy metal English bands might also be relatively common and popular. Studying this cultural melange would definitely improve one's understanding of society.
Major cities often have offices for the top firms, which is what attracts job-seekers. With more people immigrating to get jobs, more firms establish themselves in these cities. With the positive reinforcement cycle, the cities expand, in terms of demography and economy. The government pumps more money into these cities for development and building better infrastructure. Study of such cities and their development is crucial to understanding how a society is progressing.
However it is also important to note that a study of the characteristics of a society should not discard the multitutde of other smaller cities and towns present in the country. These smaller population centers will also give us valuable insights that could perhaps not be derived from looking at only major cities, leading to a more holistic and well-rounded study.
To conclude, I believe major cities should definitely be studied to understand the most important characteristics of a society. However to gain a more holistic undetstanding, smaller cities should also be studied.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: cities'; city's
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, well, while, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37066666667 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98084432483 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498666666667 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.633971233 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273871810154 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107913570104 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169322174641 0.0758088955206 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224852268101 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217845575888 0.0667264976115 326% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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