To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
We are living in a rapidly evolving times nothing last forever. Nothing is in stones, things keep changing and we are evolving with the technology. The prompt recommends that major cities are the crux of the society and play a crucial role. In my opinion, I disagree with the notion of a single city can inculcate a entire society and be a sole representation of the society for two reasons.
To begin, any capital city around the globe has a motley of population coming from various part of the world for various reasons. Hence, a capital city is a mixture of various culture and is well diversified.Therefore, it is argued that one may not rely on the capital city it self as it might not be the best choice to study a society as it has been permeated by a varied populous, this populous bring their own habit and culture with them, which is added to the city existing culture. For instance, Indians celebrating Christmas or Americans celebrating Diwali as many Americans are in India. Hence,India has adopted a culture of celebrating Christmas.Thus, it shows how globalisation has after major cities cultural habits.
To understand a culture and habits of a given society one shall not only look at one city as culture and heritage are evolve and developed in the rural part where our ancestors live. One shall look no further as bucolic population is not easy to permeate and is always a place to look for the culture and religious aspect of society.
Of course, One might suggest that a city’s globalisation might be a reason to study the <font color="#222222" face="arial, sans-serif"><span style="font-size: 16px; white-space: normal;"><b>characteristics</b></span></font> of the society. However, this is not the case as globalisation adopts multicultural habits and evolves the society.Therefore, it is not in advisable to study just major cities. Instead, one shall also look at the rural towns which conserves the culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.209375 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.32846230635 2.79657885939 155% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509375 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.590668776 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.230769231 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 5.21951772744 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140904086546 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476666150967 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517819151536 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809990200316 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524278596631 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.