To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
In context to the contemporary world, to know all the facts about society one should study the major cities which are being the backbone for development in both the social and economical aspects of the country. There is a population increase in the major cities everyone is moving from rural areas to urban cities for a modern and better life so studying major cities would help to know about the features of society. For instance, there are many kinds of people and different kinds of lives in one place this would help to know even better about society.
To begin with, all the major cities have many kinds of people who came to the city for a living, by understanding them we can ensure what impact that everyone has about society and what impact did society has in their lives and all of them have their opinion about the government and ruling the nation and what changes have been made by the government for the improvement of society. Additionally, most of the colleges and educational institutions besides them many job offers are present in the cities and hence they are the different kinds of lives in cities being rich or poor, educated or uneducated they are many lives in one place to understand society.
On the other hand, countries like India in which major occupation of the country is agriculture and even modern society depends on agriculture to sustain so we should surely understand people in rural areas and the social customs and values tend to more in rural backdrop than in cities.
In short, there is a need to understand the major cities in order to know the characteristics of a society, however, this may not be necessarily true where certain social customs and values are present in rural areas.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, may, so, as to, for instance, in short, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79069767442 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51147409397 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448504983389 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6065719182 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 206.0 118.986275619 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 23.4991977007 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4285714286 5.21951772744 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196491955378 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988871865865 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285883165908 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119500281173 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289209963753 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 14.1392134831 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.1743820225 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.39 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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