To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Today is the day of urbanization where majority population is migrating towards the metro cities in search of a better lifestyle. The metro cities of today in almost all countries provides the citizens of the city with all the amenities such as good housing, transport, education, health services, entertainment, outdoor parks etc. and hence these major cities are seeing a rapid influx of population. these cities generally have population which represents mostly the entire country in terms of social background and culture. hence these cities serve as a good source of information to someone who wants to study and understand characteristic of a society as a whole.
Consider the Mumbai metropolitan area of india which is home to over 20 million people. people from all parts of india come to Mumbai in search of a better life. There are communities within Mumbai which represents the traditions and culture of different state. To illustrate one can, find Gujarati, Tamil, Punjabi, Bengali, Rajasthani etc. communities in Mumbai. These communities are made up of the people who originate from these states and each of these communities conduct various events and functions to celebrate their individual festivals. A city such as Mumbai will serve as mecca of information for a scholar who is interested in studying the Indian society. The scholar will be exposed to people from all parts of the country coming from different backgrounds and cultures and all these people can be found in a single major city.
Another point for consideration is the fact that all major educational institutes such as major schools, colleges and universities are located in a major city of a country. In order to understand a society, it is important to talk to the academic experts of the society as these experts can provide an excellent insight to the society. A researcher studying a society can interview the academicians and collect all the necessary data required to understand the characteristics of the society. Also, the universities act as an excellent source of artifacts and documents on the society which can be very helpful for the individual studying the society.
One may argue that in a country as diverse as india only by studying major cities one cannot understand the society as a whole as there are various characteristics which are present in rural areas. In my opinion this argument can be compensated by the presence of artifacts which can be found in universities present in the major cities. Artifacts found in form of written books, white papers, art form etc. can provide enough information about the rural culture and traditions and hence helping cover the rural perspective as well.
In conclusion, major cities provide most of the necessary information which is required to understand characteristic of a society and therefore, studying major cities of a country can be leveraged to understand the society in general.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in general, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2480.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18828451883 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96587870824 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426778242678 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.0 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0355774464 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.727272727 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235309877384 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696290894844 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766553851471 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155383668742 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765063012827 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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