To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
In this issue the author cited that for the better understanding of the society one have to must study in the major city. As education is the most important for the humans’ success and failure. I agree that for better study and for the better future one have to study in major cities.
As the major city have a more facilities for the study. Study in the major study will surely augment their study to another level. University and schools in major cities have more facility for the study it have a high technology software, it have a good study material, good library ,more experienced faculties .It have more courses for the study .So, the person want to study for the particular can study there. For the example In India as Bangalore is hub for the computer and information technology study in that will help the student for better future. Study in major city will not only help for their better study as the bigger company is situated in major city.so ,the job opportunity for the student in bigger city has a higher then another city that will help a person for placement in well-established company. For the classic example as survey shows that in India person lived in major city such as Mumbai, Bangalore has a more job opportunity and salary compared to other city and towns which will help for their better future.
Study in major city not only important for better study and job opportunity it will also person for their personality development. Study in major city will help person how to deal with different situation and different kind of problem it will help person to withstand with different kind of problem. Study in major also help for the person to build social contact as he connected with more people. They came to understand different characteristics of social life.
However, study in major city is not the easy. Major city have a more expense for study as they provide more amenity. Major city also have high cost for accommodation, food, travel than any other cities. They might have difficulties at initially but, if they fight against effectively they can prevail these difficulties.
In sum ,as major city is integral part of the country for technology ,economy, entertainment it will help person for their overall growth .So for better study , job opportunity , personality development and to understand characteristics of society it is require for the student to study in major city.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.280623608018 0.240241500013 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.115812917595 0.157235817809 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.120267260579 0.0880659088768 137% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0400890868597 0.0497285424764 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0400890868597 0.0444667217837 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.153674832962 0.12292977631 125% => OK
Participles: 0.00890868596882 0.0406280797675 22% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.64930307693 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0244988864143 0.030933414821 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0846325167038 0.0997080785238 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0289532293987 0.0249443105267 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00668151447661 0.0148568991511 45% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2444.0 2732.02544248 89% => OK
No of words: 415.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88915662651 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.289156626506 0.366273622748 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.212048192771 0.280924506359 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.134939759036 0.200843997647 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110843373494 0.132149295362 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64930307693 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.38313253012 0.48968727796 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.8189787945 55.4138127331 74% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0555555556 23.380412469 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.5593294135 59.4972553346 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.777777778 141.124799967 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0555555556 23.380412469 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.21349557522 556% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.2603748327 51.4728631049 86% => OK
Elegance: 2.26136363636 1.64882698954 137% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319658161174 0.391690518653 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.179128967875 0.123202303941 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.113701202639 0.077325440228 147% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.626276575545 0.547984918172 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159578186427 0.149214159877 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157415466479 0.161403998019 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821751620983 0.0892212321368 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.399935694697 0.385218514788 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.183809636358 0.0692045440612 266% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234716912561 0.275328986314 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877979619017 0.0653680567796 134% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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