Claim: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own.
Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.
Issue contends that we learn usually from the people whose views we share than from those whose view contradicts ours. I agree with author we learn more from the people whose views opposing to us. It may cause stress and anxiety but that will lead to improvement of view and more better solution. Debate with different kind of people always helps us for the better solution.
In this word there are different kinds of people living in different region and with different circumstances, they have different kind of thinking and different point of view, they all view solution in different solution.There solution may be agree with us or may be contradict us. That will give us more solution for problem.Contradict point of view directs our attention to the situation we might be not looking at or we have ignored it. So, Opposing view direct us to the more solution of our and we can choose best of them. However, we don’t have blindly trust the opposing view we have to study the pros and cons for it before using it.
Debate is require for us to get contradict point of view. If people have same point view that they count not solves their doubt and cannot understand the problem profoundly. For example if children blindly agree what teacher taught and not clear there doubt then they will not understand fundamental of theory. If subject like maths , science children not raise their doubt they will understand fundamental wrongly then cannot understand the subject perfectly. Contradict point of view will raise to new innovation and research,If the scientist have agree that earth is the square , we cannot never know about that actually earth is square.
Some people may argue that different point of view cause the stress, anxiety and will lead to the no solution of the problem if the debate is carried out in right way and with the prominent person will always leads to effective solution. If we ignore the contradict point view and not accept it, it may be possible that we do the mistake again and again. If government takes the decision without considering opposing point of view it may cause the problem in long run. Disagreement will lead to the improvement our solution and will result to good outcome. May people have opposing view but it is our responsibility to take the right solution for us.
In sum, opposing view will helps us for more better solution and direct our attention to the side we are not looking but, it is also our responsibly to take the solution that is better for us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Issue contends that we learn usually fro...
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Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put before the verb 'learn'.
Suggestion: usually learn
Issue contends that we learn usually from the people whose views we share th...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...at will lead to improvement of view and more better solution. Debate with different kind of...
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...ys helps us for the better solution. In this word there are different kinds o...
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Suggestion: There
...all view solution in different solution.There solution may be agree with us or may be...
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Suggestion: Contradict
... will give us more solution for problem.Contradict point of view directs our attention to ...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'trusted'.
Suggestion: trusted
...em. However, we don't have blindly trust the opposing view we have to study the ...
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...ros and cons for it before using it. Debate is require for us to get contradi...
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Suggestion: required
... before using it. Debate is require for us to get contradict point of view....
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'pointed'.
Suggestion: pointed
...dict point of view. If people have same point view that they count not solves their d...
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Suggestion: ,
...amental of theory. If subject like maths , science children not raise their doubt ...
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Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
... Contradict point of view will raise to new innovation and research,If the scientist have agre...
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Suggestion: , If
...ill raise to new innovation and research,If the scientist have agree that earth is ...
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Suggestion: agreed
...tion and research,If the scientist have agree that earth is the square , we cannot ne...
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...tist have agree that earth is the square , we cannot never know about that actuall...
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...about that actually earth is square. Some people may argue that different poi...
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...anxiety and will lead to the no solution of the problem if the debate is carried ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...d with the prominent person will always leads to effective solution. If we ignore the...
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...ads to effective solution. If we ignore the contradict point view and not accept it, it may be...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...that we do the mistake again and again. If government takes the decision without c...
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...y to take the right solution for us. In sum, opposing view will helps us for ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...s. In sum, opposing view will helps us for more better solution and direct ...
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Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...In sum, opposing view will helps us for more better solution and direct our attention to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, may, so, then, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78211009174 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5587048394 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.394495412844 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0967209849 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.736842105 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9473684211 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321730222462 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132471955341 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134358605496 0.0758088955206 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208464831762 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147768101902 0.0667264976115 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.