To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Society is made up by the people who live in it. Every society will definitely have its both positivity and negativity that are juxtaposited together in a manner in which there are certain places where positivity will rule out the negative side of a place and vice versa. Most of the government of the countries focuses more attention on the major cities as maximum business and economy is generated by these but this does not mean that the small cities should be ruled out by these as the agricultural and cultural business is the boon of such places only. Therefore, I do support that to understand the vital and crucial characteristics of a society, one must focus their attention on the major cities as well minor cities.
The countries which are developing such as India, a person can easily notice that most of the development is done in the major cities like Delhi, Mumbai, Bangalore and so on. This is due to the reason that every year a lot of people are migrated from their villages in search of work and thus contribute towards the better society of tomorrow. The changes that are seen within a decade is tremendous that if a person would visit the place after years would not be able to recognize the map of the major cities. That is the amount of attention is given by the government to such places. As most of the political events, news coverage is done in these big cities only that is why focus on these places is greater than any other place. However, one would draw a wrong interpretation that the whole country is leading to the path of success which can be proven wrong too.
The major cities are also responsible towards for the entertainment and fashion industry that can easily fool the eye of the person who would only study these. As a lot of business is generated by these industries a person can easily mesaure the power of the state compared at the global level. But it is also interesting to note that most of the traditionality of the country is behold by the people who are far away from the light of glamor and only generate that amount of revenue which is enough to satisfy their quench for food. They consist the originality of the native people and harbingers the creativity in their minds and soul. Henceforth, it can be concluded that where on the one hand major cities shows the modernization, on the other hand outskirts of the cities will restore the congenital artwork.
Lastly, I would like to end my note by stating that yes, major cities does play a lot of part in contributing the characterstics of a society be at economical level, or business or the modernization and technical advancements in the field of space, computer science to name a few but minor places of a country has the similar impact in the society that might had been masquerade by the non stop change in the society. In my opinion, it would not be always right to only consider the major cities or minor ones but rather a synthesis of the both aspect is necessary to define the characterstics of a society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... it. Every society will definitely have its both positivity and negativity that are...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the person who would only study these. As a lot of business is generated by these...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'beheld'.
Suggestion: beheld
...of the traditionality of the country is behold by the people who are far away from the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2482.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 541.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58780036969 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63492347269 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45101663586 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5389604798 60.3974514979 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8235294118 23.4991977007 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169987462829 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558118591044 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367218716797 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107941335389 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336872467873 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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