To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Metropolitan cities surely reperesent the majority of the population and they are a viavle source for the researchers who desire to delve into the dominant traits of a nation. On the other hand, prominent academics on the realm of sociology contend that the rural areas in the territory of a country are the vital place where someone could detect the most important characteristics of a society. It is my personal belief that the rural areas are the most credible source for studying the most dominant and representative characteristics of a society as they are a live museum of the history and the traditions of a nation.
It would be naive for someone to dispute the importance of the major cities in modern lifestyle and thus on the conclusions of surveys on the field of sociology. The modern overcrowed cities depict the modern lifestyle and the impact of the urbanization and the globalization on the lifestyle of contemporary people. For instance, if a University would like to conduct a syrvey of the most crucial characterists of modern american society, it would be necessary to include in its sample of survey the residents of New York, the epicenter of the political and sociological evolution in american history according with a recent puvlished research in the AmericanScinence magazine.
In contrary with the above paragraph, the rural areas are more vital for safe conclusions in such sociological surveys. This is based on the fact that rural areas are crucial part of the preservation of morals and ethics in a nation and consult a live place of tradition. For example, if some students are tasked to convey a research about the major characteristics of australian society, it would be deceptive for them to ignore the importance of Aborigins tribe, the firt inhabitnats of the island, before the colonization.
Moreover, the rural areas depict the history and the origins of a nation. It is true that nowadays the majority of the population live in cities, however these people come from rural areas and they just moved to cities due to the urbanization.
In conclusion, the major cities in a country of course provide credible informations and data about the characteristics of a society as they reflect the modern lifestyle. On the other hand, the rural areas are more crucial source of informations about the characteristics of a society as they are a lifeplace where the traditions and the history are preserved though the eras.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02205882353 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09292264101 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416666666667 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.0 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3321713728 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.615384615 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3846153846 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 5.21951772744 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137907318204 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543040165865 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337478436525 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079442869375 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292927293839 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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