To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In order to understand the characteristics of a society, we should focus on the human because the main component of the society is the citizen. In this perspective, I agree with the argument that the studying major cities of the specific society can make understand the most important characteristics of a society.
Granted, minor cities possibly show significant characteristics of a society. The city named 'Incheon' in South Korea, which is now being satelite city, can be the good example that show significant characteristics of a society. Since South Korea have been traded continuously with China for a long period, the port that adjacent to China have been one of the most important region. This brings the prosperity of the port city, Incheon in this case. Historically, we can observe lots of historic sites of Chosun dynasty in Incheon, so we can understand the characteristic of the society originated from the past.
However, as mentioned above, we should focus on the people to understand well about the charicteristic of the society. Even though Incheon is still large city, Seoul has been the largest city from that days. This denotes that more historic sites of Chosun dynasty such as Kyeongbok-palace, which is the main palace for the king of Chosun, can be found in Seoul. Thus, we can understand about the characteristic of the society originated from the past in not only Incheon but also Seoul. Moreover, because still there are lots of people in Seoul, we can understand about the characteristic of the society of the present. Since the culture birth with people, Seoul is the main stream of the Korean culture such as the K-pop. Therefore, studying major city, not satelite city, is priority to understand the characteristic of the society more completely.
In conclusion, because most of people inhabit in major city, the major city delineates the characteristic of a society most vividly. Thus, I agree with the statement that to understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 24, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ore completely. In conclusion, because most of people inhabit in major city, the major city d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08308605341 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06340697741 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.409495548961 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2243477258 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.0625 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236188249016 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943008212693 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886854699614 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193949361863 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864295774156 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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