To understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In devoting and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The issue stated evinces a blatant ignorance towards the contributions of every other cities or towns towards the society that dwell in them. To understand the important characteristics of a society one must first understand what are the characteristics that would be significant enough to understand that particular society. For any society , its history and the cultural heritage is one of the salient features that must be explored and that requires travelling back in time via the stories and apothegms of people from all the rungs of the social ladder in that society. The primary focus of a society is its people and that is where from our understanding should start and grow as we move up the societal ladder.
The study of major cities should be of lesser significance than the comparable lower tier cities. To support the above view it can always be provided in defence that major cities have comparatively more established connectivity to the surrounding regions and even the outer world at times. This allows the cultural norms and customs to get adulated by the influence of external cultures that are foreign to the society in consideration. Considering a major city of the Indian society, New Delhi we can say that though New Delhi has a lot to offer in terms of culture and historical significance but if we scout around the suburbs and slowly move towards the interior we get to see descry the details of it. The city of Lucknow ranking lesser than New Delhi offers a extremely detailed insight into the characteristics of the society of Northern India. Mentioning Northern India helps us to come to the realization of the importance of regional differences that are particular to that society as a whole.
As mentioned previously, to understand a society at a greater depth, the regional influences must be taken under consideration. The regional influences can only be properly assessed if we delve deeper into the smaller cities and the daily life of the people of those regions and understand the differences that exist due to these regional separations but at the same time their existence in harmony. The variation and interpretation of the central traditions of a society based on the different regions is a important thing to be understood.
At the same time we must also consider the major cities to be studied but with a different perspective. We must study the major cities to track the development of the society as a whole and the apparent direction of growth it is headed towards. The major cities offer more of a global perspective of the society which is important factor to be considered but not the only primary factor. The major cities help us to understand the transition of the culture and traditions over a period of time and helps us to juxtapose the state of the society at different levels of development existing concomitantly.
Thus, the claim that major cities must be studied to understand any society falters when given more importance than the study of the cities belonging to the lower tiers first.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2538.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 514.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93774319066 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91654493011 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445525291829 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 824.4 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5007028432 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267384688532 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099477951536 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603451742912 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172376895337 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053464262862 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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