To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Because there are various cultures in numerous countries, many people concerned about the way how they can understand different cultures well. Some believe that studying a country’s history is the way to identify the most significant features of a country. However, I believe that people should study a country’s major cities if they want to know the most crucial characteristics of a country.
Admittedly, some people believe studying country’s major cities is not helpful to know the most important features. Nowadays, people can visit foreign countries easily, many countries spend their budget to attract those travelers. If that city, which is funded to attract visitors, become a big city so that people recognize it as a major city, it would be hard for people to understand the most important features by studying its major cities. Take Hong Kong, for example. Hong Kong is known as a country of shopping, but shopping is not the most important keyword of the country.
Regardless of the above case, studying major cities is the way to know the most significant features of the country. We can understand one’s major cities as the cities that the country funded a lot to develop the cities’ characteristics so that these cities are so popular to other nationers. In addition, country would spend their money to develop its cities not just about every industry but about several industries that have connection with country’s culture. France is the country where the fashion industry is the most developed. There are lots of design schools, and it is the home of fashion brands that we all know like Channel, so fashion is the most important keyword of France. And as we know, Paris, one of France’s major cities, is well-known for fashion and food, representing its country’s most crucial feature.
In addition, major cities are the place where many people live compared to other cities, so major cities can be representatives of their countries. America is the country where various races are live together, so there are lots of different cities that show their races’ culture well, such as Asian town. These cities could not show the most important feature, living together with different culture because those cities are preferred by specific race and taste. However, major cities such as Washington D.C., many people of different races live together so that other people, not Americans, can understand the characteristic of harmony in races. Thus, studying major cities is the way to know the most significant characteristic of a country.
In conclusion, to understand the most important characteristics of a society, people must study its major cities because major cities can be representative of countries. This is because of the reason why a city can become a major city of its country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2367.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14565217391 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80989592741 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.380434782609 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.9 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8344648463 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9047619048 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90476190476 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220619720616 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909618822905 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587414098693 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155050783079 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468271945013 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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