To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Understanding the characteristics of a society is ardous due it's involved and vast nature. The prompt states that the best approach regarding the comprehensive analysis of a society would be to study the major cities of it. I agree with this assertion that the cities give a wealth of information regarding the society. Following the are the two reasons and a concession to support the argument.
First of all, the historical characteristics of a respective society is highly influenced by the major cities of it. If one wants to analyse the historical aspects of a given society, it is indispensable to take into account the history of it's major cities. The cities define the highly important events which took place in past, and in turn had an enormous amount of impact of the evolution of the society. For instance, if someone wants to study the independence movement in modern India, he/she has take into account the city of Kanpur, which was known as the revolutionary capital at that time- because of freedom fighters residing there and the reactionary activities happening there against the colonial rule. Similarly, Champran Movement undertaken by Mahatama Gandhi started from Champaran in Bihar and spread all across India. The cities remain the cultural hub of a society, therefore have a direct impact on the development of the society.
Second of all, the major cities comprise a huge percentage of the economics of a country. The cities are areas where most industries reside- consequenlty, are responsible for driving the country's economy forward. To study the economic aspects of a country, it is not uncommon to comprehensively understand the economy of the major cities. For instance, a study of a country's political and economical aspects will involve grasping the political and economical aspect of it's capital as well as it's major cities. This info will provide good amount of information regarding the type of industries, the byproducts, daily wages of the workers and the trade unions. Most of the communist movements in the world started from the trade unions present in the factories around the major cities. Thus, the economic analysis of a city provide immense amount of knowledge regarding the society's economic functionality.
However, some may argue that, the study of a city provides a selective information regarding the cultural, political and social aspects of the society. This may be true for a particular society under some specific circumstances, but it cannot be challenged that the cities provide the most relevant data about a society.
In conclusion, comprehending the characteristics of society successfully is tedious task due to it's diversity and complexity. Hence, understanding the characteristics of it's major cities is the most relevant step towards achieving that goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, regarding, second, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2379.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 452.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26327433628 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06259504496 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477876106195 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 778.5 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7669835148 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5238095238 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241260598466 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757722292128 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428305997584 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141322960359 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038624760677 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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