"Unfortunately, the media tend to highlight what is sensational at the moment. Society would
be better served if the media reported or focused more fully on events and trends that will
ultimately have the most long-term significance."
With the flourishment of mass media, it's very convenient to stay updated with news from a multitude of resources such as smartphones, television and newspapers. However it's no shock that most of the news
we get is apocryphal. The speaker claims that media presents news only which would interest people the most instead of reporting events and trends which will be productive in the long run. I mostly agree with
the statement as lately most of the media channels show baseless news just to increase their TRPs. It's rare to find media itself promoting or showcasing the latest developments in technology and news about nation's progress.
Most of the news channels these days show repetitive news for hours because of lack of content. For eg. India TV which is an Indian news channel shows videos of cows being beamed into their spaceship for hours. On other occasions
it channel about the lives of celebrities which is interesting but serves no useful purpose for the public. Some channels go as far as to broadcast episodes of daily soaps. Media these days focuses more on flashy news and content rather than making people aware of the latest developments.
Although, some media channels definitely broadcast news which is useful, but latest technological inventions and achievements hardly make it to the headlines. When India launched its second moon landing mission it did surface on the news channels all day but more peripheral albeit
import discoveries such as progress into medical field do not get much footage. Making people aware about these innovations would fill them with a sense of pride and motivate them to work more for progress of the nation.
Government's latest schemes and programs if shown in the news would benefit people as more and more people can utilize these programs. For instance government of India has made tremendous changes to traffic. It's no longer necessary to carry hard copies of travel documents such as insurance and driving license.
Making people aware of this will help them follow traffic rules ultimately making it safer to commute.
In conclusion it can be unequivocally said that media should focus more on news that will serve a useful purpose and will be beneficial to the people and the country as a whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...smartphones, television and newspapers. However its no shock that most of the news we...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...er its no shock that most of the news we get is apocryphal. The speaker claims t...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'presents'' or 'present's'?
Suggestion: presents'; present's
...ocryphal. The speaker claims that media presents news only which would interest people t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... in the long run. I mostly agree with the statement as lately most of the media c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... spaceship for hours. On other occasions it channel about the lives of celebritie...
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Suggestion: It
...ceship for hours. On other occasions it channel about the lives of celebrities ...
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Message: Did you mean 'channels'?
Suggestion: channels
...hip for hours. On other occasions it channel about the lives of celebrities which is...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Import
...ls all day but more peripheral albeit import discoveries such as progress into medic...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Governments the latest'.
Suggestion: Governments the latest
... more for progress of the nation. Governments latest schemes and programs if shown in the ne...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...has made tremendous changes to traffic. Its no longer necessary to carry hard copie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59755789616 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546419098143 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7378996155 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.588235294 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1764705882 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.97078651685 201% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118266685352 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396698745922 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446742039021 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584731239392 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045494043248 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.