Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
every university has the responsibility to make their students aware of the presence of diverse aspects in the world; this will increase their understanding of the various elements, not only associated with their own field of studey, but also associated with general interest that surrounds their environment. Therefore, in any field of study, giving extracurricular course will provide the students a more comprehension on how to apply their major in the outside world and how to combine it with other elements potentially located within other fields of study
within every field of study, taking courses, depite being not directly related to their major, would provide students a more comprehension regarding certain aspects that can take place during their future profession or career. In fact, ethics are considered as elements within any field of study or major. In a profession, career or job, some ethical principles are to be considered which would allow people to avoid misuing their career for purposes that harm the rules of ethics. For instance, every medical student should take law courses during their curriculum in order to make them aware of the potential ethical issues that might take place at their workplace. Furthermore, besides law, every student within every field of study is required to take at least one course of mathematics, for mathematical concepts and strategies are virtually used within any workforce. In fact, adoption of mathematics is applied in research, medicine, pharmacy, chemistry and even law.
In conclusion, providing university students with courses not directly related to their major of interest, would give the students some concept and information which they may use during their long-term career or profession. In addition, this idea would be just a way to increase the students' awareness of the various elements that surrounds th world, besides their major field of study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, may, regarding, so, therefore, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37293729373 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78883551019 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524752475248 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.076893241 60.3974514979 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.888888889 118.986275619 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 23.4991977007 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 5.21951772744 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224941755831 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995323030484 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557350561601 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170040141381 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114901493337 0.0667264976115 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 14.1392134831 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 48.8420337079 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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