The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
what defines good leadership? A good leader is a member in society who proposes rules and provides actions in order to ensure the wellfare of his country as well as the related citizens. taking into account the necessities of the average members of society defines a great leader and distinguishes him from one whose main interest is to gain absolute power.
In any society, a leader is analogous to a parent whose main interest is to ensure the welfare of his children. A good, disciplined, healthy child might give us an idea of the adequacy and qualifications of his parent. Similarly, aknowledging a society as being in good shape might give us a glimpse on the qualities and characteristics of its leaders. In fact, the main purpose of a leader in any societal environment is to solve the problems associated with the society in question, whether economically, environmental, and so forth. The ability of a leader to solve such problems and provide a society or a country a good sense of health and well-being, declares him as being sufficiently adequate and effective.
Another aspect associated with the welfare of a country's citizens resides on the physiological and unwholesome situations that those citizens might encounter. In fact, the qualities of a good leader is to ensure that members of a society receive a significant health services in order to enhance their quality of life and physiological satisfaction. A leader who solve his country's problems, as mentioned in the previous paragraphes, without solving individual's problems as in health-related need, is not considered a good leader.
Besides the arguments provided above, one aspect of good leadership is to provide citizens of a society free will to complain and to express what they are thinking and what they desire to change in their country. this concept is what distinguishes a good leader from a tyrannical one. In fact, a good leader must take into account other people's ideas and opinions which may provide sufficient advocacy in order to support his cause. A leader, who despite being able to solve various problems associated with his country and population but is rather obdurate in his decisions and belief, would not be viewed as a role model by members of his society. rather, he would be viewed as one whose main purpose is to gain power and authority.
In conclusion, there are various aspects that could be considered to define an effectived leader. However, if a certain leader might not be able to fit all of them, this does not necessary detract from his effectiveness as a leader. In fact, a good leader should only be considered as astute, heartful and open-minded in order to be regarded as a qualified leader venerated by the rest members of his country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2304.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 462.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98701298701 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98950269538 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445887445887 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 748.8 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7973933276 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.263157895 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3157894737 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130161726534 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477813368365 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353569139382 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861268176945 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110882875944 0.0667264976115 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.