As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but
more complex and mysterious.
Human beings have always been curious kinds amongst millions of lifeforms on earth since the dawn of the civilization; the ones whose thirst for knowledge can never be satiated. However, it is also said that "little knowledge is dangerous"; often lack of knowledge or sometimes more than required information can turn particular situations unfavorable to us as well. Saying that, we obviously cannot ignore the fact that advacement of knolwedge and comprehension has led us to current era where we still continue to look for answers to unsolved queries of nature, society, and the world. Therefore, in contrast to the assertion of the prompt, I believe that gaining more knowledge definitely makes us better and enhances our capabilities, but on the other hand, it can also result in things getting out of hand as we continue to unravel the mysteries of the world.
To begin with, the advent of industrialization, modernization and economic advancement in current era has been possible only because we kept on exploring and gaining knowledge about different aspects of our environment. Without people acquiring information, inventing things, and making novel discoveries, we woud not have been able to enjoy what we have today. For instance, the fact that a young student can talk to his mom who lives thousands of miles away with a simple phone call is itself the proof of our achievements gained from striving for more knowledge. Had anyone imagined few decades ago that people would be able to talk to another person regardless of the physical distance? Certainly not; in fact people would be writing letters to the date and waiting days or even months to get the letter. This has visibly changed billions of lives around the globe and continued breakthroughs made in the technology with enhanced understanding and better knolwedge will foster even better changes in the future. With above example, it is easily understood how acquiring more knowledge made things more simpler and better.
Furthermore, gaining knowledge has also broadened our horizons; knowledge and information has brought about a revolution in our understanding and opened new portals of imagination. For example, Galilio was once condemned for spreading false information that 'earth revolved around the sun instead of the vice versa'; later with sufficient understanding and knolwedge about the solar system, the very person is remembered for his insight and contribution. This also suggests that knolwedge gives birth to enlightment, unravels the mysteries and helps us differentiate rights amidst wrongs. If we did not gained sufficient understanding of our solar system, we would still believe that earth revolved around the sun which would forever keep under the dark. Heeding to this, the prompt's arguement clearly doesn't hold water and it is plausible to say that knowledge unravels the mysteries rather than making them more complex.
However, there are some instances where we acquired a lot of knowledge and our understanding led to more complex matters. Let's take an example of space time continnuum and our understanding of the universe; be it the subject of black hole, the presence of foreign life forms 'Aliens' or the origin of the universe, it seems like the more we gain knowledge and information about them, the more we fall into the abyss. If we had no knolwdge of black holes or the outer space, we would not be pondering how those things work. Scientists are determined to find a life in the outer space which leads to new discoveries the more we strand in the vast universe; who knows what mysteries and secrets the universe is keeping from us. Therefore, it is inevitable that with progressing understanding of these minute elements, it will lead us to more complex ideas and mysteries to unravel leaving us with our imagination and boggling mind.
Knowledge is rather vague and never ending with so much to learn and explore. We have attempted to untie the knots of the secret pouch of nature but being able to barely pull the strings. Despite learning how vast knowledge is, it woud be a crime to ignore how knowledge has made our lives simpler and easier. We must strive to explore and acquire more knolwdge even if they do not make things more comprehensible because, ableit late, it is certain that eventually we will be able to unravel the mysteries with adequate knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1103, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
...ow acquiring more knowledge made things more simpler and better. Furthermore, gaining kn...
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Line 5, column 602, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'gain'
Suggestion: gain
...ate rights amidst wrongs. If we did not gained sufficient understanding of our solar s...
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Line 5, column 801, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... to this, the prompts arguement clearly doesnt hold water and it is plausible to say t...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...erstanding led to more complex matters. Lets take an example of space time continnuu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, in fact, in contrast to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 33.0505617978 206% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 58.6224719101 155% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3676.0 2235.4752809 164% => OK
No of words: 721.0 442.535393258 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09847434119 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.18183781724 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85157679287 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 356.0 215.323595506 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493758668516 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 1146.6 704.065955056 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9310319597 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.04 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.84 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37116947839 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111744257283 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111592364369 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232905560336 0.150359130593 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764274447294 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 163.0 100.480337079 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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