We learn our most valuable lessons in life from struggling with our limitations rather than from enjoying our successes. To what extent do you agree/disagree
At often times do I ponder in a success party whether the person is learning any valuable lesson enjoying his success or is it just a waste of time, energy and money. The issue at hand, if we gain important life lessons from improving our flaws or celebrating our success, has my opinion completely favouring the claim that we always learn from our struggles. Enjoying the success doesn't provide any skills or knowledge that bolsters our life experiences.
Although, people might opine that worrying too much about our limitations makes us nervous and impairs our focus on the job at hand. For instance, if a student gets 90 out 100 marks in Mathematics and without celebrating a commendable performance starts to worry about his short-comings, he might become anxious and score less in the next exam. Enjoying his success will help boost his confidence and will help him ace his latter exams. However, I don't find any valuable lesson to learn from having a success celebration. Even if he panics, he should keep working on his difficulties because that is going to be helpful in the long run. Methods like yoga and meditation can be taken up to keep anxiety levels in check.
Besides, with enjoying a success, there is a high probability that it can lead to overconfidence that is detrimental to anyone. For instance, the great ruler Anton Henry was on a roll-tide defeating one kingdom after another. Instead of working on his limitation that his soldiers can't fight in the severe Russian weathers, he started having a jocular time commemorating his success. Had he worked on his limitations, with enough preparation and resources, he could have invaded Russia. Therefore it is important to keep overconfidence in check by focusing more on the weakness rather than the successful outcome.
Working on failings strengthen the pillars that led to an unsatisfactory output. Building on the weakness of a person or organization helps to make secure that the future outcomes of struggles would be more successful than ever. For instance, Bing is a popular internet search browser that rivals Chrome, the world's only browser to have secured. Although Bing is not near to Chrome's share in the market, they are toiling to become the best. If they stop struggling and starts with their success party, their dreams won't turn to a reality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: doesn't
...rom our struggles. Enjoying the success doesnt provide any skills or knowledge that bo...
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...lp him ace his latter exams. However, I dont find any valuable lesson to learn from ...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ing on his limitation that his soldiers cant fight in the severe Russian weathers, h...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...esources, he could have invaded Russia. Therefore it is important to keep overconfidence ...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'chrome'.
Suggestion: Chrome
...e secured. Although Bing is not near to Chromes share in the market, they are toiling t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, then, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9693877551 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79053182895 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8901190894 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.526315789 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225365193059 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635402432189 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902807941722 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138244158964 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118713407097 0.0667264976115 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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