The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The well-being of society is determined by the people living in the society their lifestyles, their life standard, culture tradition and so forth. There are many factors for assessing the well-being of society also the well-being of society reflects the development of the society. Moreover it depends on the people of the society to shape the well-being of the society. I strongly agree with the above assertion that society well-being is enhanced when many of its people question authority that is by question or evaluation the cultures and tradition is the society can reshape the society.
First and foremost, there are many prevailing conventional belief that have made the society fall backward. There are so many superstitious belief in the society which help to degrade rather than progress the society. For instance, in our society there is the system that people are inclined toward the superstitious belief if a person is sick that they take them to monks rather than taking them to hospital. Furthermore, there types of conventional and harmful belief should be abolished is the society. Because these are benighted the society rather than reforming. So, the people should eradicate these types of belief which would rather harm the society.
Moreover, the society doesn’t like to accept or make reform they want keep as it is. The world is rapidly progressing every day new technologies is invented which makes the people easiness in the life so, society which still follow the old traditions should question their authorities to reform the societies with new ideas and principles. In some of the society in our country, there is system or tradition that women are deprived of education, and as per today’s world the knowledge and education is the foremost things to make a space in the world, so question with the authorities and abolished the old tradition with new one will help the people in the society to have freedom or of their own interest and help their to come up with new creative or innovative idea which helps in enhancing the society.
Finally, the societies well-being can be shaped by the people living the society by correcting their erroneous tradition and superseding those with the new one. The people of the society should have meeting and come up with new concept of enhance their society so that their well-being will enhance. For instance , if a societies is becoming polluted then their people should come up themselves be united and thinking of making the communities clean rather than expecting all form the government.
To sum up, the people has their own responsibility to enhance their society well being by supplant their old convention tradition with the maverick and innovative ideas which will help them to have the comfort and ease.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...eflects the development of the society. Moreover it depends on the people of the society...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ief should be abolished is the society. Because these are benighted the society rather ...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...eties with new ideas and principles. In some of the society in our country, there is system...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ir well-being will enhance. For instance , if a societies is becoming polluted the...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a society' or simply 'societies'?
Suggestion: a society; societies
...l-being will enhance. For instance , if a societies is becoming polluted then their people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2345.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09782608696 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71292803872 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40652173913 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.3105009436 60.3974514979 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.941176471 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0588235294 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256363127398 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110950343879 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630169176808 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168031083691 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542210351693 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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