The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author of the prompt adduces that there is a link between the enhancement of the people’s welfare and their capability for questioning the authority’s action. This the claim with which I generally do concur. Among the countless reasons which give adherence to my viewpoint, I will list the most conspicuous ones in the following paragraphs.
The first important fact which should be considered is the tendency of power in people which can be converted to corruption. Mankind for the sake its intrinsic feature is a power seeking individual; on the other hand, the ultimate power without control over it could lead to immoral action to appetite the selfish desire of that person. A lucid example from the history whose endless eager for the chasm power is Hitler. He was elected to govern Germany; however, his ruined and corrupt attitude toward the leadership made him a dictator who did not bear any disagreement with his will. This feature caused the II World War; however, if there would be a supervisor over his action this drastic event would not have occurred.
The equal crux reason which should be considered is the importance of the connection between the leader and people. Indeed, the term of questioning in the prompt could be considered as the link which is provided between the denizens and governor. The communication between them leads to the better understating of the governor from the existed situation and people demands. Consequently, the base of the governor’s actions and executions will be shaped according to this demands list. As a result, the actions fulfill the people requirements and provide the welfare of citizens.
Finally, the modern governing system which is based on democracy possesses the core principle which is of the people, by the people, and for the people. This main rule illustrates the position and importance of the people in the society. In another word, a governor is a person whose election is through society and is done by people to give the services for the people. Thus, the main role which all spotlights are lit on it is the people. The governor also should provide and response to people desire. In addition, the situation and demand list of the people fluctuates during the time and there is no fixed wish list. For providing better and updated services, it is crucial to be informed from the citizen's wills; which is questioning can be a way for this delivery.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons depict that asking the governor’s function prevents the shaping dictators, provides an updated report of people’s will and controls over the leader’s function.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntrols over the leader's function.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, however, if, so, thus, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0799086758 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87231035966 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509132420091 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9377548744 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.952380952 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19613471014 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636314486952 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406430377545 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109984283314 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489789318293 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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