The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement makes proper sense and portrays a feeling a relatablity. The fact that the upbring of a society a can be through questioning the authority for what is right and wrong. Also it develops a composer about knowing the basic fundamental Rights of an individual, including the common principles accompanied with it. Also, the fact that most of the historic event occurred are due to this common emotion attached to feeling of being insecure.
The following example is validating the mentioned statement, some sort of punishment or fine is to paid if a person does not follow the basic traffic rules which is applicable for everyone including the Officials. Hence if a Cop is caught breaking the rules than he is also charged for it, this would have not been possible if people had ignored it. Thus it affirmative that questioning the authority is infact beneficial for the common people given the fact that the point on which it is questioned is valid.
Moreover, it is also mentioned in the statement that "when many of its people", yes a group of people will make the quarrel more partial towards their side rather than a single person who stands up to question the authority. This also depicts that anything can be achieved if people come together and unite towards a common goal.
Another most promising example is the Independence from the Britishers that where ruling over other countries and ways in which every individual of respective country united to force them to forfeit their long going rein. Talking about India it was Mahatma Gandhi that set on a journey for Independence and is considered as the father of the nation because of his bravery and courage. Everyone wanted freedom and had their ways of fighting but Mahatma Gandhi followed the path of non-violence and helped Indians to attain freedom.
The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority is absolutely true. A person who feels unstable would always thrive to excite other around him. The form in which the sentence is kept in front of the readers in proper and not naive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, sort of, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94397759104 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65503961937 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551820728291 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9344459155 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216323849837 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727266576134 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703872331508 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121299867489 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546741325913 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.