The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
In today’s world, freedom is constituted in every part of the world.Freedom to speak,freedom to write,freedom to vote,etc are few of many important factors which are essential to maintain harmonious behavior among people.This has created an social balance.Citizens of country have every right to question and interpret suggestion for a particular topic.This prevents prejudice of laws and restrictions.
Firstly, Injustice laws and restricts which people oppose tend to make political leaders in control.Being responsible as a citizen brings the cruelty of political leaders stable.For example, Mahatma Gandhi stood up for the rights to freedom by British Government.He was determined to bring a change to this injustice. This was done without any ammunition or war to make India free. This movement rose which lead to a historic event.
Secondly, every individual who ought to differ and come out of the crowd can bring vicissitude. Even if the person has been opposed by community.For example,Abraham Lincoln who fought for African people.He choose a path which was fearful and dangerous.But eventually he rescued African American from the clutches of slavery.Without opposing or questioning the authority this could have not been possible.
However, dubious question to provoke leaders shouldn’t be the case.Mocking of government and using quipping comments wont lead to a good path.For example, if association of people are planning to stop taxes in a nation is preposterous.People must understand the importance of taxation.Implying taxes can lead to maintain the government affairs for the well-being of people. Understanding a situation is important rather than reaching to get final result.
In conclusion, it is important for a government to take necessary steps for the people. Government should be dogmatic and held questions for development and prosperity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 282.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66312056738 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46712230468 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.647702487 60.3974514979 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.7 118.986275619 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.21951772744 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114464417986 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389874900974 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523265396124 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618426908978 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401348637443 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.1639044944 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.