The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
This bar chart gives information about the rate of doing regualr physical activity in Australia, in the year 2010. Also this chart compares figure of man with woman and age.
Overall this chart, we can know that female tend to excercise more than male. Only in group 15 to 24 age, the percentage of male is higher than female and additionally, this group has highest ratio among male. In case of female, percentage of doing regular activity is highest in age 45 to 54 and this group has also highest rate in every group.
According to this chart, there are some trends. Rate of male who doing physical activity decreases until age 35 to 44 and after this group, the rate is go up again except group 65 and over. On the other hand, unlikely male group, female rate increases up to 53.3% in group 45 to 54. However the rate goes down after this group.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
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...hest in age 45 to 54 and this group has also highest rate in every group. According to ...
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Suggestion: However,
...ncreases up to 53.3% in group 45 to 54. However the rate goes down after this group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48717948718 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18144708258 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4386851818 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7777777778 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238907822536 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109106946552 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593672146818 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176918834508 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181055828109 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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