bullying
The bar graph represents the comparison of cyber bullying and physical bullying experienced by the people from the age group of 14 to 19+.
Overall, it can is clearly evident from the graph that,both cyber bullying and physical bullying are fluctuated over all age groups. Most of the people are suffered by physical assault compared to online bullying especially after the age of 16 years whereas the cyber bullying is seen less common among these age group. On the other hand, cyber bullying is most commonly seen at the age of 14 years than other group.
According to this bar chart, physical bullying is more common among all the age groups, especially at the age of 16, which accounts for 50% and it is followed by 35% at the age of 17; where as it is less common at 15 years at 10%.
When cyber torturing are less commonly seen at the age of 15, though it reaches almost equal to the physical bullying at 10%, but it is most commonly seen at the age of 14 compared to higher age people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...oup of 14 to 19+. Overall, it can is clearly evident from the graph that,bot...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , both
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...it is followed by 35% at the age of 17; where as it is less common at 15 years at 10%. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34267054903 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445054945055 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7471917778 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296956799655 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230744469396 0.103423049105 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107528927005 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235511293759 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131906140089 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.