The bar chart illustrates the number of hours of leisure time enjoyed by males and females in five separate employment statuses.
Overall, the figures for leisure time enjoyed by men are higher than those of women in all of 3 different categories: employed full time, unemployed and retired. In the remainder categories, they are completely the datum of leisure time enjoyed by females.
Men and women tend to spend a lot more time on relaxing when they are unemployed. It takes women under 80 hours to do nothing while the figures for men is higher( over 80 hours). In term of the period they are retired, males and women have nearly an amount of leisure time as the third item. With men, the figure is just over 80 hours and it is over 70 hours for females. Look at the first category, hours of leisure time are nearly a half of those of the third item. When men work as full-time jobs, they spend lesser time on relaxing, which just account for approximately 50 hours while women spend around 40 hours on it.
With part-time job and housewives, we just see the figures for females. When they take charge of home-makers, they have just over 50 hours to wind down. Comparing with the second item, it is clearly that the amount of time is just below 10 hours.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...all of 3 different categories: employed full time, unemployed and retired. In the remaind...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey are unemployed. It takes women under 80 hours to do nothing while the figures...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hose of the third item. When men work as full-time jobs, they spend lesser time o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53070175439 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36104683707 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5689954321 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0833333333 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322439556841 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134664288276 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918250445253 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220226973165 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922388979122 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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