The chart shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts illustrate the proportions of sodium, saturated fats, and added sugar in American meals including snacks and breakfast. All of the nutrients are detrimental if consumed in large amounts.
Overall, the percentage of all the above-mentioned nutrients are the least in breakfast and most during dinner except for added sugar that is the highest proportion in snacks eaten by American.
The percentage of sodium is found to be in large volume in dinner, containing 43%, whereas added sugar constitutes just below a quarter. American people consume the least portion of sodium during breakfast and in snacks with an equal figure of 14 percent, resembling the least among others. While during the lunch almost one-third of nutrients is shared by sodium, its value doubled for saturated fats i. e. 26%.
During breakfast, the percentage of saturated fats and added sugar is 16%, however, in the case of snacks, the ratio is nearly doubled: the latter outweighs the former.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
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Message: There should be no space here: 'i.e.'.
Suggestion: i.e.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, whereas, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2125 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72304976084 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7315977582 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955837847326 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524338645823 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343740130147 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693087616084 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389686359758 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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