The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts given illustrate water consumption in six different regions of the world.

Overall, the highest proportion of water used for agricultural purposes in these areas except in North America and Europe where water consumed for the industrial sector.

When it comes to agricultural use, Central Asia takes the first place for allocating water, at 88%. Besides, water used for farming in Africa and South East Asia also exceeds 80%, namely 84% and 81% respectively, while the figure for South America is slightly over 70%. In compared to these four areas, North America and Europe consume considerably lower percentages of water for agricultural purposes, corresponding to 39% and 32%.

As regards water distribution in the industrial sector, developed nations in Europe dominate the other nations involved with 53% recorded. It is followed by North America which is responsible for 48% of water allocation. Figures of these two regions are far higher than those for the remain areas which are over or below 10% surveyed.

According to domestic use, the needs are noticeably higher in the Western nations, with the greatest proportion, namely at nearly a fifth, found in South America.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, while, as regards

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32105263158 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74232244821 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8258453763 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231398333637 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103112941564 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676620134614 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141594896453 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741965522459 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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