diagram shows how the rainwater is collected for the use of the drinking in water in an Australian town.
The diagram illustrated step by step how the water from the rain is collected and treated for drink in an Australian city.
First of all the rainwater is captioned by the drain of each house going through all the way on a plumbing to the filter. After the filtrate of the H2o goes straight to tube to a tank to be storage for the next process.
When the water reach a certain level, it goes over a duct to another depot. There some chemicals will be added in the water for the treatment. Once the product have had the reaction cleaning the water, it is ready for the distribution to the residencies.This water again goes through a pipe and it is shared to the properties.
In conclusion what we can see is the process of rainwater colletion and preparation in an appropriate water for consumption and distribution to the units.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reated for drink in an Australian city. First of all the rainwater is captioned ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...for the distribution to the residencies.This water again goes through a pipe and it ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ipe and it is shared to the properties. In conclusion what we can see is the pro...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'appropriate water'.
Suggestion: appropriate water
... rainwater colletion and preparation in an appropriate water for consumption and distribution to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 687.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7946377225 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7867008556 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324975655885 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13128991217 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116515177465 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191279175872 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124452133054 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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