The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.

The given line graph illustrates the sales of 3 books including children's books, adult's fiction and educational books in a nation between four years from 2002 to 2006.

According to the graph, it is clear that the sale of children's books and educational books showed an upward trend, but adult fiction lost popularity over the given time period. Adult fiction was at the top in 2002 with a sale of 45 million dollars, followed by children's books at 33 million dollars and educational Bol at 25 million dollars. However, adult fiction showed downward trend and sold around 30 million dollars, where children's books boost up and sold maximum number of books by 2006 approximately 55 million dollars.

Apart from this, educational books hike significantly and sold books nearly 33 million dollars by 2006 which was least sold books in 2004 and overtaking adult fiction in 2006

Overall, children's books and educational books ruled the market in three given categories.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1320754717 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60923681707 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540880503145 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6698849235 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.2 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436243797924 0.215688989381 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.283270863184 0.103423049105 274% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113099994969 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297605859164 0.15604864568 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117667327706 0.0819641961636 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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