The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrates how the centre of town known as Islip varied before and after developing centre.
To begin with, it can be clearly seen that Islip town centre was quite simple, compared with developed town centre. In the north side, it was countryside and it also seemed that there was nothing. In addtion, there were 2 shops alongside the main road and there were 2 roads which are connected to the park and to school in both side of main road. Also, numerous houses were located in the south side.
Meanwhile, it was considered that various things will change after development of town. Firstly, the road will disappear after development and it will become to surround the centre of town and it also will be dual carriageway. Furthermore, the bus station, the shopping centre and the car park will be situated where the shop was in the north side. The main road will change as a pedestrian path. On the other hand, the shops below main road will remain in the town. Moreover, the new housings will be built instead of old housings, and the park will get smaller than before consequently.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72680412371 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3997655056 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530927835052 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5225922747 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3636363636 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114997315078 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527110213753 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449586355009 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095332196707 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266376960855 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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