All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What the government pay for all education and healthcare is now one of the most controversial issues that people like debating about. I partially agree that the government should support for education and welfare. However, I also disagree this opinion as well.
To begin with, making the gap between rich and poor is inevitable in capitalism society nowadays. Thus, it is considered by many that the government should care poor people by providing the various welfare policies. For instance, the Korean government have been providing the foods for student for free in school. Furthermore, hospital fee is quite cheaper that other countries, because the Korean government are supplying fee to people. Consequently, numerous welfare policies in Korea enable poor people to be possible to learn in school and to go to the hospital cheaply. That is the reason why many people believe that the welfare is the best solution to solve the gap between rich and poor.
Meanwhile, there are also some disadvantages. If the government pay all costs of welfare such as education, healthcare, the problems of budget may be generated nationally. In addition, a problem of budget in the government will allow an increase of taxes that people should pay. Therefore, it is seen that the generated problems of budget might make other economy problems. Because, if the taxes increase in the country, it is natural that people will reduce to consume. As a result, it may bring the depression of economy in the future, because consumption is significantly important in economy.
In conclusion, although there are some disadvantages, I assume that the welfare of education and healthcare should be funded by government. Nevertheless, I disagree that all education and healthcare should be free. Because, it may cause other tons of problems and exacerbate the national situation. Hence, I totally believe that the government should pay for welfare partially.
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Suggestion:
...gap between rich and poor. Meanwhile, there are also some disadvantages. If th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25080385852 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92895159691 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488745980707 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3300338076 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.9473684211 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63157894737 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306915779026 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976343951312 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108658663807 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213479954847 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12778336723 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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