The maps below show the village of stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram chart reveals that information about representation the rural area in 1930 and 2010 .It gives two years.
To sum up,the salient feature seems that in 1930 adolescent most used the farmland .Thus,in 2010 dozens have built new building
department.
Moving a quick glance on the illustration,in 1930 primitive people would used the farmland.
Therefore,it was very big demand.Thus,shops and gardens nearby reduced related to farmland in 1930 but also have person used house.
On the flip side,in 1930 and 2010 was not be changed .For instance,river stoke,post office,key houses,primary school and bridge.However,in 1930 large house replaced in 2010 retirement home.The gardens had been climbed in 2010.Hence,the built upsurge rather than shops bomb in 2010.As far as,gardens did not rise in 2010.So,there have plethora new department built in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, therefore, thus, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68702290076 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2925992346 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717557251908 0.547539520022 131% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.68697065 43.030603864 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.0 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2 5.23603664747 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 1.69756097561 1649% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126215070844 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665980930577 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332268457262 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669064167043 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331368599419 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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