The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.

Essay topics:

The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.

The table depicts the average sales of three different branches of a restaurant in Vancouver. These 3 restaurants were located at Georgia Street, Dunsmuir street and Drake Street in Vancouver. The table gives information about the number of transactions , transaction values, number of eat-in and Take-Away transactions and the most popular item at each branch.

It is evident from the table that the restaurant at Dunsmuir had the highest number of transactions and the transaction value. It had 854 transactions with each transaction valued at 10.69 dollars. The restaurant at Dunsmuir had 750 transactions which are more than the Drake Street’s 390. But the Dunsmuir’s 5.61 dollars per transaction was less than the Drake Street’s 9.02.

The difference in the number of transactions via Eat-in and Take-Away at each Branch were almost similar. The branches in Georgia Street and Drake Street had the highest and lowest number of transactions for both Eat-in and Take-Away. In all the 3 branches the most popular item was a Chicken item. Georgia Street’s popular item was the Chicken Burger while Dunsmuir Street and Drake Street’s famous item was Chicken Wings and Chicken Pasta .

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...item was Chicken Wings and Chicken Pasta .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43915343915 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06091585771 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455026455026 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7987334719 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4545454545 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 5.23603664747 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195092374529 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103317123285 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127414265768 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160560539758 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108269165408 0.0819641961636 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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