The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006, 2007 and 2014

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The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006, 2007 and 2014

The table compares the percentages of market share possessed by different laptop brands all over the world in three different years (2006, 2007 and 2014).

Overall, HP was by far the greatest market share holder in the notebook computer sector and most of the main corporations increased their market share except for Fujitsu and other unnamed companies.

In 2006, HP took an overwhelming place over other businesses at 31.4%, which outdistanced the runner-up being Dell by approximately a half of that. It then retained the leading position until 2014 at 34.25%, being the greatest number achieved by any rivals. Together with Dell being at 26.12% in 2014, which was about 10% higher than the initial figure, they accounted for more than a half of market share in the industry.

Unlike the two top brands, Samsung suffered from a loss in 2007, from 11.6 to 10.7; however, it managed to capture over 14% global market share after 8 years. Toshiba and Lenovo had around 6% of share in 2006 and increased sedately after 8 years while the least significant holder Fujitsu saw a slight decline from 4.8 to 3.1%. All other brands possessed a considerable market share in 2006 at 22.8% but plummeted to only 7.11% in 2014.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, then, while, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92270531401 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50183717415 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6038647343 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1602556807 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.375 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344935717213 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144368441459 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918590870316 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218914526269 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679013837354 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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