Dear Mr. Smith,
I am delighted to receive your offer for the profile of "Production Engineer" in your organization. Our last meeting was very fruitful as we discussed certain aspects of the expansion of your company and hiring skilled professionals for improving the production.
I have gone through the job description and responsibilities mentioned in your offer letter for this role, and I must say that it is a very challenging role where one can learn a lot of new things. However, due to some commitments in my present job, I am afraid I would not be able to accept your offer. The current project, which I am working on, is extended to the next year due to some unforeseen constraints and requires my intervention for its smooth implementation. Apart from this, I have discussed my future prospects with my current employer and he is reluctant to relieve me from the responsibilities until the successful execution of this project.
One of my colleagues, having hands-on experience in the manufacturing field, is interested in working in your organization. And, by looking at his past experiences and diverse skill-set, I believe he would be a value add to your esteemed organization. I have enclosed his resume for your reference, and hope your search for the production engineer will be over after interviewing him.
I thank you for your consideration.
Kind Regards,
Peter Parker
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...ur organization. And, by looking at his past experiences and diverse skill-set, I believe he wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, apart from, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 5.60731707317 713% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35908420734 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627705627706 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3524293563 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15650351892 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614395741178 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551266099798 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109126700076 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469399779747 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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