The company you work for is planning to provide special training for staff. Your
duty is to find out if the local conference centre has suitable facilities in order
to hold the training.
Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter
• Give some details about the training course
• Describe what kind of equipment you will need for the course
• Ask some questions about the facilities at the conference centre
Dear Sir,
I am the head of the Event Management team at Robert Bosch Engineering and Business Solutions. I am writing to enquire regarding the facilities provided in your conference centre and to request some additional gadgets required for an event.
On next Wednesday, i.e. 26th August, our company would be organizing professional training in Artificial Intelligence for some of our staff. Before reserving the conference centre, I would list the equipment that is needed by our trainers as well as trainees.
First and foremost, we require about 80 mics for the participants of this course along with an uninterrupted internet connection as it is vital for the practicals. Apart from this, a few display screens and a projector are imperative for this training.
Besides, I would like to harvest some information regarding the prerequisite arrangements that are available there. Since it would be a full-day event, I would like to know whether the lunch will be provided. Also, is the dice and speakers available in the conference room?
I have attached my business card with this letter. Please provide me with all the requested information. For any queries, feel free to call on the given number.
Yours faithfully,
Jaskaran Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am the head of the Event Management te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, regarding, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26368159204 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98411261447 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671641791045 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8197120464 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3846153846 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225442616304 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681038850078 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665157727767 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102627024894 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595751575694 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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