During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
Remind him when and where you met
Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
Say Why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear James,
How are you doing? Hope you can remember Adrian, who was sitting next to you at UL 550 airplane on 20th of May during your travel from United States to Switzerland. I think that you have reached Switzerland and had opened the new branch of your restaurant chain in Munich. I am quit sure that you have taken a wiser decission in putting up a branch in our country, since there is an emerging demand for restaurants over the past decade in my country due to increase in women employment.
Therefore, I though to contact you in finding availability of vacancies for delivery personals in your restaurant. As I told you earlier, I am a student at St. Helen’s College following a degree course in Hospitality Management. I have classes from 9.00 a.m to 4.00 p.m and I would like to join you in the evening shift during the weekdays. Apart from that, I have two years of experience in working in a delivery team of a famous restaurant in Switzerland.
If, I am given the opportunity for an interview, I can forward all my certificates and letters of experience and discuss further on my interest in joing with your organization. Considering my studies in Hospitality Management and my experiences in the relevant field, I look forward to hear from you soon for an interview. I feel honoured to get to know you during the journey and I would like to thank you on the immense knowledge you gave me on business start-up which could definitely be beneficial in my future career.
Best Regards,
Adrian
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'airplane' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'airplanes'.
Suggestion: airplanes
..., who was sitting next to you at UL 550 airplane on 20th of May during your travel from ...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...untry, since there is an emerging demand for restaurants over the past decade in ...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...s in the relevant field, I look forward to hear from you soon for an interview. I feel ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, therefore, apart from, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 26.3917525773 205% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72284644195 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90645874213 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.103627124 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.083333333 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21155357189 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817156026474 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571163947942 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149027651539 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303300720164 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.