During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessma. In your letter
Remind him when and where you met
Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
Say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. George,
I guess you would glad to remember the meeting in vistara flight departed from IGI international airport to Singapore last month on Saturday. I was sitting next to you and we discussed the Job opportunities in one of your restaurants.
I recently completed my hotel and hospitality management diploma and training from a well-reputed restaurant in the city. Now it is the time to proceed further towards career opportunities in this field. I prefer to hold the post of chef as preparing food is my passion and I manage to cook almost all types of cuisine.
After reading your advert in the local newspaper I decided to contact you. I believe, as per my requisite qualifications and skills, I suited to the profile most. Besides this, during my training period, I get to know the taste of various region's people.
I would highly delighted for your consideration.
I am expecting to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Alex
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. George, I guess you would glad to remember the m...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nities in one of your restaurants. I recently completed my hotel and hospita...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... cook almost all types of cuisine. After reading your advert in the local newspa...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'delight'
Suggestion: delight
...arious regions people. I would highly delighted for your consideration. I am expectin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, well, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01242236025 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.991739202 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4993291774 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3636363636 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192841728033 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692000702843 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771535110606 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948851841373 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646870897 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.