During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants.You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman.In your letter
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr smith,
I am a passenger on the 456 flight from Ohio to Berlin sitting in your side seat.I write a letter requesting you for the job you promised me.
I met you on this flight and you introduced yourself as a business person. And you also said that you have chain restaurants and I told you about my abilities and you offered me a job at your restaurant.
I have worked as a chef at Italian restaurants for a several years in a famous restaurant in Berlin. But because of my immigration to Ohio, I want to have a job at a restaurant.
I can tell you that I was made for this job because I was cooking since childhood and learned cooking under my grandmother.Of course, I have gone through the culinary courses of the Nations in Berlin. But I am very fond of Italian cuisine. And in a couple of cooking competitions in Germany I have been able to win the Golden Plate award.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Yours sincerely
Anne
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...hio to Berlin sitting in your side seat.I write a letter requesting you for the j...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g you for the job you promised me. I met you on this flight and you introduc...
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Line 13, column 62, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'year'?
Suggestion: year
...ef at Italian restaurants for a several years in a famous restaurant in Berlin. But b...
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Line 17, column 95, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...was cooking since childhood and learned cooking under my grandmother.Of course, I have ...
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Line 17, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Of
...nd learned cooking under my grandmother.Of course, I have gone through the culinar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47252747253 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6760667354 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4638449645 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226083127888 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955053676692 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947611874106 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133809468559 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100161528629 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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