A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him for the invitation
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I am so grateful that you have invited me to spend the coming summer vacation at your place. Unfortunately, I will have to decline your invitation due to my cousion’s wedding.
You know, my aunt’s daughter Asha she is getting married in April. So, there’s a lot of preparations to be done. As I am the eldest cousion, my presence in the wedding is crucial to perform all the Indian marrigage rituals and customs. You know, we Indian have many traditions and every member of immediate as well as extended family has a role to perform. Thus, I can’t come this time.
I am kind of sad to refuse your tempting offer as I always wanted to visit you in Canada. How about I come to visit you in Spring? I have heared the weather is pleasant, and I can get to see the snow as well. What are your thoughts on this?
Give my regards to Jenny and I can’t wait to hear from you!
Warm wishes,
Mina
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, thus, well, kind of, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4043715847 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45209712612 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644808743169 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7941068921 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233416948942 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811676322431 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629863747401 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142996253712 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838052741481 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.