A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter
-describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
-summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
-say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to your company, Spirit Mall, that has sent a questionnaire asking for feedback on whether to support a youngsters sports team or offer a couple of outdoor concerts. It is very kind of you to offer either options for people.
I find that providing a sports team for children would be a nice opportunity to spend time after school. Sports activities are helping children to keep active and make friends as well as get thoughts away from school for a while.
Offering some outdoor concerts for all people would be a great opportunity to gather together and enjoy live music. It would be nice especially for older people or poorer families who usually can not afford themselves this kind of events.
My suggestion would be to spend the money on younger people sports. Children need to develop physically and co-operate with others.
Yours faithfully,
Karina Marina
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, while, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95483870968 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59067406124 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683870967742 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1641749104 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258065275729 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996994385574 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524027277396 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146815547719 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670946611629 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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