Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to share my feedback regarding both the options, sponsoring a local under-18 cricket team or organizing live music concerts, considered by your organization for spending a certain amount of money.
Firstly, funding an under-18 cricket team will boost the morale of the children, and it will encourage them to flourish and show their talent. It will be a golden opportunity for all those underprivileged talented children who are unable to afford sports equipment, like cricket bat and pads.
On the other hand, people in our society, hardly get any time to get together and spend free some time with their family members. I believe, organizing a live music concert would be a fantastic medium to spend quality time with our loved ones and rejuvenate our minds.
Although it is very difficult to choose only one option, I believe, company's hard-earned money should be spent on sponsoring children’s sports team because the music or other recreational events can be organized by the contribution of all the members of the society, and at the moment children must make the best use of this crucial time for their future bright, and this can be possible when they are provided with all the facilities.
I hope my suggestions would help your organization in taking the right decision for spending money.
Kind Regards,
Peter Parker
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1013215859 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73737418187 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621145374449 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.45625529 44.8134815571 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.75 76.5299724578 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.375 16.8248392259 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214861908898 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870367336963 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765022547488 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127719839302 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730078207401 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 8.37731958763 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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