Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends.
In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and the holiday
• explain why you didn't write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Hi Ayesha and Sarah,
Hope you both are doing. Although it’s such a short time since we saw each other, it feels much longer. Thank you so much for the lovely memorable holiday as well as for sending me our precious photos which I am going to cherish forever.
I am sorry for writing to you late as you know being an Architect it sometimes gets very tough to get out of the zone. For the last few days I was extremely busy working on a new restaurant project which we are soon going to launch. It’s in its final stages so a lot of detailed attention is required. Hope you understand.
After completion of this project I am off for a few days. I would be really glad if you guys come over to mine. There is plenty of room in my house and I will pick you from the airport. We will regain all the memories from childhood to recent holiday together. Looking forward to showing you around my country, its unique places, food as well as culture. I really hope you can make it
Take care and write back to me.
Sidra
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...you late as you know being an Architect its sometimes gets very tough to get out of...
^^^
Line 9, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...make it Take care and write back me. Sidra
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, well, as for, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32978723404 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17409435936 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686170212766 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2222659697 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6153846154 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243774075802 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833431023828 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592453634643 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109394342801 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689894942149 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.