On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I would like to make a claim using my travel insurance policy for a lost Ipad. My policy number is G214450.
I carried my Ipad with me during my vacation to hotel Taj, Athens, from March 21st to 24th. It was made by apple, Ipad 4G, 12 inches, and was black in color. It also had solid black casing to protect it from shocks and water. It was fairly new and bought at Rs.40000.
I remember using it for the last time when I was reading online book in the hotel lobby. At that time, I received a call on my cell phone, so I stepped outside to answer it. I believe, I forgot it on the couch while going out to attend a call, I tried to look for it afterwards on the couch and in the lobby, but I couldn’t find it.
As my electronic devices are protected under travel insurance, I would like to make a claim for it. Therefore, please send me information about the guidelines of making a claim. You can either email or call me to discuss the details. I am expecting a quick response from you to initiate further procedure.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you
Yours faithfully,
ABC
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
...e by apple, Ipad 4G, 12 inches, and was black in color. It also had solid black casing to prot...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng to protect it from shocks and water. It was fairly new and bought at Rs.40000. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33181818182 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40960114665 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604545454545 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1718532649 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5333333333 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137995179193 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512767291377 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761147266267 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771695192114 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671744420991 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.