On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- explain how you lost it
- tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear sir or madam,
My name is Behnaz Yousefi. I used your travel insurance service in my trip to France last week. I am writing to you regarding an item I lost on that trip and ask for your help.
The lost object was a Rolex watch which I have been gifted on my wedding anniversary by my husband. It was made of gold with diamond decorations around the screen. It approximately costs 3000 dollars besides its emotional value.
Since I am very punctual, I always wear my watch wherever I go. It is one of my habits to check the time every now and then so I am certain that I lost it on the airport because the first time I realize it was missing was when we were on board and I check for the time.
My first priority is to find my own watch. Hence, I would like you to contact airport's lost and found section and inquiry about my watch. It would be great, if you can bring my own watch to me. Nevertheless, I know it is quit impossible to find it. Therefore, I would like you to pay enough money to compensate for my loss in case you fail to find the real object.
Hoping to hear from you soon,
Sincerely yours,
Behnaz Yousefi
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or madam, My name is Behnaz Yousefi. I used your t...
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Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...t is one of my habits to check the time every now and then so I am certain that I lost it on the a...
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Line 13, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... board and I could not leave the plane. My first priority is to find my own watc...
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Line 17, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... case you fail to find the real object. Hoping to hear from you soon, Sinc...
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Line 21, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct. Hoping to hear from you soon, Sincerely yours, Behnaz Yousefi
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Line 25, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar from you soon, Sincerely yours, Behnaz Yousefi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29411764706 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32690960341 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610859728507 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2689041408 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7857142857 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209262166233 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729531609708 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805084206586 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125492570023 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755129638409 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.