Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The number of people who opt vegetarianism is rapidly increasing. Some people believe that everyone should replace meats with vegetables to prevent the detrimental effects that consuming meats has on human's body. Although a non-vegan diet increases the risk of becoming a victim of cancer or a heart attack, it is not acceptable to force people to choose one unanimous lifestyle and take away their free will.
On the one hand, people who have a meat-based diet are more prone to have various health issues. Studies show that consuming a large amount of meat, especially the red ones, is the biggest factor that contributes to high blood pressure. People with high blood pressure in turn are more likely to experience heart diseases. In addition, meat-based diets are high in fat and salt which both are harmful for human's body. It is also a common that meat-based diets are not as nutritious as the vegan ones since they lack the variety of vitamins that a vegan meal contains. Therefore, it seems reasonable to advise individual to become vegetarians to maintain their health.
On the other hand, it is too extreme to force people to follow a lifestyle even if it is for their own benefit. As human beings, we are entitled to have a choice no matter how harmful our choice might be for our body. People adopt different lifestyles for various reasons and it is not justifiable to deprive them of their freedom regardless of the cause. For example, some people enjoy eating meat and consider it one of the most pleasurable activities in their life. Depriving these people of this simple pleasure might trigger their depression and have psychological damages. As a result, in my opinion, vegetarianism must not become a mandatory option and should remain a mere recommendation.
In conclusion, although swapping meat with vegetables in meals has numerous significant advantages, it is still a matter of personal preferences and must not be forced upon individuals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03353658537 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81050436503 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551829268293 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0697240046 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125051714721 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456988778589 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406869177227 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751216402804 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336797557116 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.